5 Sentence Challenge Peyton

I can see a Christmas tree with snow and with coloured baubles.

There two blue cars and one green car parked on the slippery white road and there is a brown dog by the owner.

Two people are holding presents in their hands and the presents are different colours.

Boys are trying to get to somewhere to skid down a hill and one boy is sitting on the sled and the other is pulling it.

People are leaving different patterns and shapes on the frosty white road.

26.11.17

2 thoughts on “5 Sentence Challenge Peyton

  1. Nicola says:

    Well done !

    You have written a good description of what is happening in the picture.

    You made a great observation when you stated that people have left patterns on the road.

    You have used some effective adjectives.

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