Soft as a pillow
Gloves everywhere
Snowmen attacking
Cars are icy

Crunchy sounds
As cold as Antarctica
Freezing my tongue
Snow falling everywhere

Icicles getting bigger
Melts quickly
Tsunami of snow
Children not getting warm

Fire melting
The soup is hot
Toes need warming
The heating is working.

By Alex


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  1. Mrs Thomas says:

    This is great Alex! I love the image of a tsunami of snow! And I really like the warm ending of fires and soup. This is very well structured poem. Well done.

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